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|Author:||Logan [ Wed Aug 21, 2002 7:24 am ]|
as I sit in class
computer drawn images
noise called music
not a moving soul
only mere mortals
some one please, tell me what you think this means
I'd like to get interpitations
how is everyone
"On one whole bottle uplifting, theres no telling what I'll do.,Run head first into traffic, a mind set on annihlation. No sence makes sence" Pantera
|Author:||hypoxia [ Wed Aug 21, 2002 8:36 am ]|
I think you're missing a syllable in the last line on the first one. *grin*
I love haiku. Problem is that it's so Westernized.
I hate class, too. Where do you go?
|Author:||Logan [ Wed Aug 21, 2002 10:03 am ]|
i wanst shooting for accuracy, but yeah, there is one missing in the first line :|
I got to brown Collage-hoping to do 3d animation starting next quarter
I go part-full time from 7:30 to noon mon-fri, the full time cause there are no summer vacations, but a total of about 14 weeks off in the corse of the year-at the end of each quarter its either a week off, two weeks off, or for "xmas" vacation, its a month.
|Author:||ephemerae [ Wed Aug 21, 2002 2:29 pm ]|
lines badly lacking
the necessary structure
|Author:||CrimsonChyld [ Wed Aug 21, 2002 4:49 pm ]|
wait... doesn't moving have two syllables???
*winces, expecting a thwack on the head*
|Author:||Dove [ Wed Aug 21, 2002 5:56 pm ]|
|Author:||hypoxia [ Wed Aug 21, 2002 9:04 pm ]|
Ben, you *know* what your haiku does to me. Careful there. . . . *heh*
|Author:||Logan [ Fri Aug 23, 2002 11:46 pm ]|
heres another one for you, its not hiku
Red rose on the street
Crushed by my feet
A lack of water
Now the flower is beat
I will wait until later
Her words fallen in a crater
Will she send me news
or will the friendship falter
Today I saw some shoes
I have no money, no clues
Seemingly worthless, gives me the blues
We all pay our dues
Tonight is Long
Shall I write a song?
*takes a bow*thank you.
"Do you love your guns(yeah)
the goverment(FUCK YEAH)"
|Author:||edentropy [ Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:11 pm ]|
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This is dark poety at its best! I would like to read more of Logan's work. Emo's beat dram!
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